Please let me know your opinion. Which one? what you like? Is anything confusing or not understood? I think I like the yellow, and I may incorporate that into the site in a simple way. Please leave a damn comment: :]
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This yellow is hard to get right.. It looks great on my monitor. But I know that it will look different on other screens.. and I don’t have the pantone swatches to go by.
So I’ve been sitting here watching you slave over these new business card designs, when all I really want to do is eat a pasta bowl with you. HA. Nah, in all seriousness, numero nueve is golden, yo. Likin’ the color choices,your sketchin’ in the background, your symbol enlarged on the back..I still haven’t decided whether I like the symbol on the front a little larger like on numero cinco better than nueve yet. Hmmm. Whilst I ponder, let’s go ahead and move onto something else for now…like food. ;] You’re doing fan.ta.stic.
so i tried leaving my mailing address bein all cute an shit but it wouldn’t let me and i don’t wanna repeat what i wrote earlier even tho it was shorter than what i’ve got this time #7
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I would repeat the same tag line as the front of the card. interactive + design + development.
The sketching works well to create a feeling for what you do. The boxes used in similar versions don’t have a purpose. The colors on this one stand out and provide enough contrast to be legible.
div.lowercaseText > p has mega margin top & bottom FYI :P
Hey Brandon! Look’n good!
Here is my high level feedback: 1. looks good but is too clean.
3,4,8,and 9 all look a bit too busy on the front- with the letterbox treatment over the sketches.
Overall I like the touch of yellow to make your name and info pop. You’ll need to be careful of how this color translates in print- may look muddy.
I get your logo/ mark and its useage on the back of the card, but I don’t understand the other patterns. Maybe your trying to communicate that you actually draw? Not sure if that is needed.
For taglines, I think I know what your going for with the interactive/ graphic and design/ development but it seems a bit weird. Not sure if the other is working any better either. You have a wide range of skills and services, but who are you mostly going after? What would they expect or need to know about you? That is what I’d lead with. Hope this helps! L8r
AFTER CAREFUL DELIBERATION IT IS MY PROFESSIONAL OPINION THAT CARD # 5 IS THE BEST IN EVERY WAY. THE BUSINESS CARD OFFERS SUTTLE INTELLIGENCE WITH AN AGGRESSIVE APPROACH OF CREATIVITY. THIS BUSINESS CARD IS SURE TO ATTRACT ANY BUSINESS OWNER TO DELIGATE THEIR SERVICES.